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Sounds interesting!! The art is great too!!

just being honest, but it seems to me that there is too much writing...all the manga I've seen is more "short, sharp and shiny".
Only saying "My name? Who cares? I'm just a number in the masses, i'm no different than the billions of people inhabiting this world. I live a life as normal as your own. My life has nothing fantastic or fantasy about it." In the 1st panel would have gotten the message across It is good that straight away you get to know the character, and that the epic tear on his face actually has a scientific explanation

I've found that reading this Manga [link] (about making manga) has REALLY helped me learn, but you seem to know a lot already ^w^ It also has some nice art tips: like looking at the finished picture in the mirror to see all the mistakes

Anyways this is only my opinion, and I am far from an expert ><

Hope I helped ^w^ And good luck with "Bleak" it seems real interesting